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October 24, 2009
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The suffocating darkness
Finally creeps in from the
Never ending void called
The sky. It waits so silent
Until the final day is gone
And the moon is out to play

And the stage is set for the play
As it waits a moment in darkness
Only at that moment are the
Traces of utter calm gone
The air and space is silent
And the terrifying ghouls at last called

So, the creatures have been called
And the forest will begin to play
Howls pierce the silent
Yet never ending darkness
And the craved peace of the
Soundless sunset has gone

All wish that these devils were gone
Empty pockets and friends are called
As little thieves with hands readying the
Knocks and yells on doors. They play
Such games as they scream in the darkness
With heartbeats racing like feet yet so silent

The victims beg for such silent
Moments but nothing will stop until they are gone
They grasp for countless jewels in the darkness
Each terrifying ghoul is called
Names that do not suit their horrifying play
Their suffering audience prays the

Moment that relief washes over and the
Children finally fall silent
After so many hours at play
The sweets and candy are now gone
Ghouls that are so-called
Infants will creep back into the darkness

Parents and Adults cherish the silence, and the darkness
Rests as these masked children finish their play. And those
Who have called to the lord thank that the pestering ghouls have gone!
Woo! Ok, so this is the edited version of my previous Sestina, I pray to god this one is ok!
Monsterpikachu Oct 25, 2009
Oooh i'm really diggin' the changes. (:
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